Hi
everyone,
Have you
realised the importance of punctuation when writing a composition? Sometimes
you complain about it but punctuating correctly gives meaning to your writings.
Here’s an example taken from an old magazine, whose reference I don't remember.
Dear John,
I want a man who
knows what love is all about. You are generous, kind, thoughtful. People who
are not like you admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me for
other men. I yearn for you. I have no feelings whatsoever when we're apart. I
can be forever happy -will you let me be yours?
Gloria
Version 2:
Dear John,
I want a man who
knows what love is. All about you are generous, kind, thoughtful people, who
are not like you. Admit to being useless and inferior. You have ruined me. For
other men, I yearn. For you, I have no feelings whatsoever. When we're apart, I
can be forever happy.
Will you let me
be?
Yours,
Gloria
Is this a
love letter in both cases or not?
Leave your
comments and tell me the differences you spot in both versions.